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PostSubject: Jimmy's Journal   Fri Apr 16, 2010 7:56 pm

ehhhhh


i'm redoin this whole thing


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PostSubject: Re: Jimmy's Journal   Fri Apr 16, 2010 8:10 pm

is there more?
because...i want more
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PostSubject: Re: Jimmy's Journal   Fri Apr 16, 2010 8:11 pm

lulz, yes more, i was planning on submitting a bit at a time xD
i'll submit 2 more chapters ;o


i'll edit my first post from now on to continue the story
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PostSubject: Re: Jimmy's Journal   Sat Apr 17, 2010 2:31 am

added more, nb4 tl;dr
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PostSubject: Re: Jimmy's Journal   Sat Apr 17, 2010 10:24 am

MORE...I....NEED...... MORE...... PLEASE SIR CAN I HAVE SOME MORE.
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PostSubject: Re: Jimmy's Journal   Sat Apr 17, 2010 10:25 am

this is really good, i imagined myself in that situation while i was reading it, though u could fix the sequence of time the entries were written, because its like u stop and continue to the next day in the same day and time that the entry was labeled, if u need help with the grammer i would be happily to help, i wont delete or tell u to take this out, jut organize them to make the time of sequence fit more accuretly .
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PostSubject: Re: Jimmy's Journal   Sat Apr 17, 2010 10:29 am

the grammar was intentional, im trying to put this from the point of view of some average douchebag. unless you think i should fix that

and what do you mean by sequence of time? i seperated them cause i didnt think i should have spectacular events happening everyday, and it didnt make sense for that.

also its hard to keep the reader hooked if i keep putting boring stuff in everyday Razz
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PostSubject: Re: Jimmy's Journal   Sat Apr 17, 2010 4:28 pm

added 3 more entries
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PostSubject: Re: Jimmy's Journal   Sun Apr 18, 2010 1:16 pm

as per request, updated and added more ;o
i only know of a couple of you that read this, but thanks for the compliments xD
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PostSubject: Re: Jimmy's Journal   Sun Apr 18, 2010 2:53 pm

someday i will read this....=.=
some day
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PostSubject: Re: Jimmy's Journal   Sun Apr 18, 2010 8:28 pm

uh huh.
suuuuure
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PostSubject: Re: Jimmy's Journal   Sun Apr 18, 2010 9:18 pm

good bathroom reading d('.'d)
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PostSubject: Re: Jimmy's Journal   Sun Apr 18, 2010 11:52 pm

DXDemon wrote:
someday i will read this....=.=
some day
haha i was thinking the same thing demon
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PostSubject: Re: Jimmy's Journal   Sun Apr 18, 2010 11:54 pm

bayareaboss wrote:

haha i was thinking the same thing demon

thing is...i did!!
and it was an entertaining read
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PostSubject: Re: Jimmy's Journal   Mon Apr 19, 2010 3:20 am

added 3 more journal entries
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PostSubject: Re: Jimmy's Journal   Tue Apr 20, 2010 12:05 pm

i didnt add anything yesterday, so i added 5 journal entries now
february 24th and on
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PostSubject: Re: Jimmy's Journal   Thu Apr 22, 2010 5:52 am

March 1st through March 3rd added!
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PostSubject: Re: Jimmy's Journal   Thu Apr 22, 2010 4:11 pm

ok, i added
march 4th, 5th, 7th, and the 8th to the story
im also going back and editing stuff, but i'll change it all at once rather than one at a time, i may add journal entries later, but i'll say which ones are new, etc.
for now you guys are going to get my "rough draft" so to speak
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PostSubject: Re: Jimmy's Journal   Sat Apr 24, 2010 7:10 pm

march 9th, march 10th, and march 11th added
also edited the story thats been done so far
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PostSubject: Re: Jimmy's Journal   Mon Apr 26, 2010 10:54 am

was wondering where the hell my story went <.<

added march 13, 18th, and 19th
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PostSubject: Re: Jimmy's Journal   Tue May 04, 2010 12:01 am

march 23rd through april 6th added
didnt really know if anyone was still reading this so yeah <.< been a bit late
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PostSubject: Re: Jimmy's Journal   Sun May 09, 2010 3:26 am

april 8th through the 27th added
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PostSubject: Re: Jimmy's Journal   Sun May 09, 2010 4:57 pm

Lolwut
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PostSubject: Re: Jimmy's Journal   Sun May 09, 2010 6:59 pm

Sad
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PostSubject: Re: Jimmy's Journal   Tue May 18, 2010 6:23 am

added april 28th to the finish
<3 Fred

anyways, i need to rewrite the ending, and i also need to tweak some things (like how my ending was obviously rushed, and i forgot about hte doctor and had to do a copout death for him)
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