DXDemon Newsman
Posts : 571 Join date : 2010-04-14
| Subject: Re: Jimmy's Journal Tue May 18, 2010 2:04 pm | |
| wait thats over? NUUuuuuuuUUuuUUuuU | |
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twistedhands Noobie
Posts : 14 Join date : 2010-05-18
| Subject: Re: Jimmy's Journal Tue May 18, 2010 3:31 pm | |
| made an account with the sole purpose of commenting on this. It's really good, honestly. I think it is also - Squeezit wrote:
- November 19th 2010
The kids asked my name. I told them I don’t know. God forbid they learn my true name, they may be able to control my every action. I read it in one of the books lying around here. I should probably clean my room since I have guests… do i smell an Eragon reference. | |
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Squeezit Member
Posts : 587 Join date : 2010-04-15
| Subject: Re: Jimmy's Journal Thu May 20, 2010 6:03 pm | |
| - twistedhands wrote:
- made an account with the sole purpose of commenting on this. It's really good, honestly. I think it is
also
do i smell an Eragon reference. haha nono, i have only seen the movie Eragon, which was terrible IMO i used to read a lot of fantasy books when i was younger, and one of them was about this druid and a druid kid in training. the druid kid wasnt allowed to let the enemy know his true name otherwise they could use magic to control him. idk why i got the idea for the story but, i wrote the whole story in one sitting while i was tired as hell and couldnt sleep due to amazing insomnia. then at the end of the story i was getting tired enough to sleep, which im sure you can see, so i kinda rushed the ending. i've been a bit lazy but eventually ill get around to rewriting it. and lol dxd, after i rewrite the ending i think i may make a sequel though i gotta say, i really appreciate the compliment | |
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twistedhands Noobie
Posts : 14 Join date : 2010-05-18
| Subject: Re: Jimmy's Journal Fri May 21, 2010 12:28 pm | |
| It's entirely plausible that another book used a similar premise, but all the Eragon stories (the inheritance...cycle i think. Eragon, Eldest, Brisngr) make reference to things such as true names. Names that when used give the speaker complete control over that person.
and yes, definietly do a sequel if you want. I look forward to it. | |
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Squeezit Member
Posts : 587 Join date : 2010-04-15
| Subject: Re: Jimmy's Journal Fri May 21, 2010 1:12 pm | |
| ill do a sequel after i improve upon this one. i need a lot of improving on it >.< im kinda interested in making it better and getting it published yes it needs a lot of work to do that though i know >_< | |
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Squeezit Member
Posts : 587 Join date : 2010-04-15
| Subject: Re: Jimmy's Journal Fri Jul 27, 2012 7:50 am | |
| I updated the shit out of this. Changed a lot, and changed the ending. Added a lot more to the ending and it is now un-finished.
I'm still not done, after fixing it (god it's terrible) I may actually publish it to be purchased for 1 measly dollar on a nook or whatever on the Amazon Store :3 | |
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