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PostSubject: poetry   Tue Jul 13, 2010 8:23 am

since maribo is writing stories again, i might as well start writing haiku again
with a simple start

snow starting to melt
clouds scatter like open wings
wings flutter far away

ps, how many know wut haiku is


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PostSubject: Re: poetry   Tue Jul 13, 2010 8:32 am

of course, not like i cant do simple poetry


the tides subside, and the winds are fine
it is time that surprise, the humanly kind

noone can see, what lies far behind
for it is the sea, which one must pass in kind

paths of sand, which one must tread
wishes to turn back, and thoughts of dread

the door is near, and time is scarce
whether to run in fear, is a choice of your own care

but behind the door, lies nothing to grieve
those who pass for sure, will be in peace
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PostSubject: Re: poetry   Tue Jul 13, 2010 1:02 pm

ashes flying in air
gentle breeze softly strokes clouds
stars shine like gems
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PostSubject: Re: poetry   Tue Jul 13, 2010 1:18 pm

lake is silent
fish jumps and causes small splash
ripples spread far
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PostSubject: Re: poetry   Wed Jul 14, 2010 4:09 pm

lol i know what a haiku is just dont know the exact explanation. i know it has something to do with syllables
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PostSubject: Re: poetry   Sun Jul 18, 2010 9:15 pm

I enjoyed these, though I don't exactly have a ton of haiku to compare them to. It would be fun to see you try tanka; I've attempted it four times and it's been a struggle. The last one I did was the easiest, but the previous three, eugh.
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