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PostSubject: Amateur Poetry with Zer0beat   Amateur Poetry with Zer0beat EmptyThu Sep 22, 2011 8:19 pm

Most of this shit is inspired by video games. Most of the references are damn obvious.
I do this every now and then, and I'm always taking criticism to write better.
One thing I've been told and am working on was to be less specific, letting the reader create a picture on their own. Which is a problem I've noticed in my poetry.

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