Jimmy's Journal

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ehhhhh

i'm redoin this whole thing

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is there more?
because...i want more

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lulz, yes more, i was planning on submitting a bit at a time xD
i'll submit 2 more chapters ;o

i'll edit my first post from now on to continue the story

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added more, nb4 tl;dr

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MORE...I....NEED...... MORE...... PLEASE SIR CAN I HAVE SOME MORE.

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this is really good, i imagined myself in that situation while i was reading it, though u could fix the sequence of time the entries were written, because its like u stop and continue to the next day in the same day and time that the entry was labeled, if u need help with the grammer i would be happily to help, i wont delete or tell u to take this out, jut organize them to make the time of sequence fit more accuretly .

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the grammar was intentional, im trying to put this from the point of view of some average douchebag. unless you think i should fix that

and what do you mean by sequence of time? i seperated them cause i didnt think i should have spectacular events happening everyday, and it didnt make sense for that.

also its hard to keep the reader hooked if i keep putting boring stuff in everyday Razz

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added 3 more entries

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as per request, updated and added more ;o
i only know of a couple of you that read this, but thanks for the compliments xD

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someday i will read this....=.=
some day

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uh huh.
suuuuure

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good bathroom reading d('.'d)

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DXDemon wrote:: someday i will read this....=.=
some day

haha i was thinking the same thing demon

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bayareaboss wrote:: haha i was thinking the same thing demon

thing is...i did!!
and it was an entertaining read

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added 3 more journal entries

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i didnt add anything yesterday, so i added 5 journal entries now
february 24th and on

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March 1st through March 3rd added!

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ok, i added
march 4th, 5th, 7th, and the 8th to the story
im also going back and editing stuff, but i'll change it all at once rather than one at a time, i may add journal entries later, but i'll say which ones are new, etc.
for now you guys are going to get my "rough draft" so to speak

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march 9th, march 10th, and march 11th added
also edited the story thats been done so far

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was wondering where the hell my story went <.<

added march 13, 18th, and 19th

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march 23rd through april 6th added
didnt really know if anyone was still reading this so yeah <.< been a bit late

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april 8th through the 27th added

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Lolwut

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added april 28th to the finish
<3 Fred

anyways, i need to rewrite the ending, and i also need to tweak some things (like how my ending was obviously rushed, and i forgot about hte doctor and had to do a copout death for him)